I woke up early in the morning and had some food. And went to school because now it's the final exam period, so every student study hard and me either, but just studying all day so boring I hope this time goes by fast then I will hang out with my friends that would be wonderful.

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CORRECTIONS:

TITLE: Diary 1

Better:  The First Day of the Week

                                                                   NR                                            WW

Previous Sentence: ↗ I woke up early in the morning and had some food.

Better Sentence:  I woke up in the morning and had some food.

                                  Red/PRON                                                                                       RED/AP/Lower       WW

Previous Sentence: And went to school because now it’s the final exam period, so every student study

                                           AP    RED             Lower                               V       WW        AP                    WW         AP          

                                    hard and me either, but just studying all day so boring I hope this time goes by fast

                                           AC/Lower/WW                                             RED/ C

                                    then I will  hang out with my friends that would be wonderful.

Better Sentence: I went to school because it’s the final examination period. Every student should study

                                hard. But just studying all day was so boresome. I hope this time would be finished               

                                 fast. Then, I can hang out with my friends and that would be wonderful.                              

                       REVISED:

                                                               The First Day of the Week

                                           I woke up early in the morning and had some breakfast. I went to school          because it’s the final examination period. Every student should study hard. But just studying all day was

so boresome I hope this time, would be finished fast. Then, I will hang out with my friends and that would be wonderful.

     LEGEND:

Red                             Remove/omit

SF                               Sentence Fragment 

Lower                         Change the letter(s) to small letter(s)

                                    Change the letter(s) to big letter(s)

FR                               Wrong word order

→

                                Indent the sentence  

NR                              No error/mistake

WB                              Wrong abbreviation

↗                                 Start a new paragraph

#                                  Space needed

×​                                  Remove a space​

∽​                                Transpose (change the position of the word) 

WSP                           Wrong spelling

AP                               Add a period (.)

 AC                                  Add a comma (,)

AE                               Add an exclamation point (!)

AQM                           Add a question mark (?)

AAP                            Add an apostrophe (‘)

PL                               Change to Plural form

WWF                                Wrong word form

WW                             Wrong word

WPU                           Wrong pronoun usage

RO                              Run-on (Fused Sentence)

S                                 Subject Needed

 V                               Verb needed

P                                 Preposition needed

C                                 Conjunction needed

A                                 Article needed

PRON                            Add Pronoun

ADV                            Add Adverb

AN                            Add Noun

MP                              Misused Preposition

//                                  Faulty Parallelism

 Edited by:  TESS