Introducing yourself

   Hello my name is sungjin won. I am 21 years old.

I have older brother hyunsoo. He is very kind.

My favorite food is chicken.

CORRECTIONS:

        Title: → ↗ Introducing yourself

       Better:    Introduction of Oneself

                                                   AE/Lower       Lower               NR

            Previous Sentence: → Hello my name is sungjin won. I am 21 years old.

              Better Sentence:      Hello! My name is Sungjin Won. I am 21 years old.

                                                          A                    V / Lower             NR

              Previous Sentence: I have older brother hyunsoo. He is very kind.

              Better Sentence:  I have an older brother named Hyunsoo. He is very kind.

                                                                         NR

              Previous Sentence:  My favorite food is chicken.

              Better Sentence:  My favorite food is chicken.

                    REVISED:

                                                                                 Introduction of Oneself

                                                        Hello! My name is Singjin Won. I am 21 years old.

                                       I have an older brother named Hyunsoo. He is very kind.

                                                         My favorite food is chicken. It is so delicious. Maybe

                                       I won’t change my mind about chicken s my favorite food.

          LEGEND:

Red                             Remove/omit

SF                               Sentence Fragment 

Lower                         Change the letter(s) to small letter(s)

                                    Change the letter(s) to big letter(s)

FR                               Wrong word order

→

                                Indent the sentence  

NR                              No error/mistake

WB                              Wrong abbreviation

↗                                 Start a new paragraph

#                                  Space needed

×​                                  Remove a space​

∽​                                Transpose (change the position of the word) 

WSP                           Wrong spelling

AP                               Add a period (.)

 AC                                  Add a comma (,)

AE                               Add an exclamation point (!)

AQM                           Add a question mark (?)

AAP                            Add an apostrophe (‘)

+

PL                               Change to Plural form

WWF                                Wrong word form

WW                             Wrong word

WPU                           Wrong pronoun usage

RO                              Run-on (Fused Sentence)

S                                 Subject Needed

 V                               Verb needed

P                                 Preposition needed

C                                 Conjunction needed

A                                 Article needed

PRON                            Add Pronoun

ADV                            Add Adverb

AN                            Add Noun

MP                              Misused Preposition

//                                  Faulty Parallelism

Edited by: TESS

           NOTE:

                 I ADDED TWO SENTENCES AT THE END OF YOUR PARAGRAPH.