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제 목 영어일기쓰기1  
교정강사 tess
등록일 2022-07-11
작성글 today, I cooked kimchi soup. It’s really delicious.
And today weather is windy. Bye
교정내용

 

  영어일기쓰기1

 

today, I cooked kimchi soup. It’s really delicious.

And today weather is windy. Bye

 

 

    CORRECTIONS:

 

         Title: 영어일기쓰기1

                                                                                                 

                                     Lower                                             NR

           Previous Sentence:   today, I cooked kimchi soup. It’s really delicious.

 

          Better Sentence:    Today, I cooked kimchi soup. It’s really delicious.

 

                                                      WWF

         Previous Sentence: And today weather is windy.

 

         Better Sentence:  And today’s weather is windy. I enjoy this kind of day.

 

 

                                                                 

   REVISED:

                                                                     영어일기쓰기1

 

                                                Today, I cooked kimchi soup. It’s really delicious.

                                       And today’s weather is windy. I like this kind of day.

                                                 

 

 

LEGEND:

Red                             Remove/omit

SF                               Sentence Fragment 

Lower                         Change the letter(s) to small letter(s)

                                    Change the letter(s) to big letter(s)

FR                               Wrong word order

 



                                Indent the sentence  

NR                              No error/mistake

WB                              Wrong abbreviation

                                 Start a new paragraph

#                                  Space needed

×​                                  Remove a space​

                                Transpose (change the position of the word) 

WSP                           Wrong spelling

AP                               Add a period (.)

 AC                                  Add a comma (,)

AE                               Add an exclamation point (!)

AQM                           Add a question mark (?)

AAP                            Add an apostrophe (‘)

+

 

PL                               Change to Plural form

WWF                                Wrong word form

WW                             Wrong word

WPU                           Wrong pronoun usage

RO                              Run-on (Fused Sentence)

S                                 Subject Needed

 V                               Verb needed

P                                 Preposition needed

C                                 Conjunction needed

                                Article needed

PRON                            Add Pronoun

ADV                            Add Adverb

AN                            Add Noun

MP                              Misused Preposition

//                                  Faulty Parallelism

 

     EDITED BY : TESS

                    NOTE: I ADDED A SENTENCE AT THE LAST PART OF YOUR PARAGRAPH.

                                 YOUR TITLE IS WRITTEN IN HANGGUL WRITING SO I CAN’T CHANGE IT.

          

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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