교육시스템


교육시스템




제 목 My home  
교정강사 tess
등록일 2022-07-11
작성글 I live in korea. I have four family. Father is really kind and humerous.
Mother is so cute when she drunk alchole. And I have older brother hyunsoo.
He is very boring and serious.
교정내용

 

 




 

                     My home

 


                          I live in korea. I have four family. Father is really kind and humerous.


                          Mother is so cute when she drunk alchole. And I have older brother hyunsoo.


                          He is very boring and serious.


 


 


 


 


                             CORRECTIONS:


 


                                                                   Lower


                                         Title:  My home


                                  Better:    My Family

 


                                                                 Lower                 Red


                             Previous Sentence: I live in korea. I have four family.                    


                             Better Sentence:  I live in Korea. We are four in the family.


 

                                                                  PRON                                    WW


                                   Previous Sentence:   Father is really kind and humerous.


                                   Better Sentence:  My father is really kind and humorous.



                                                                  PRON                                         WWF/WSP


                                    Previous Sentence:  Mother is so cute when she drunk alcohole.


                                    Better Sentence: My mother is so cute when she drinks alcohol.


                                                                                                     

                                                                                     A                WSP


                                    Previous Sentence:And I have older brother hyunsoo. He is very boring

                                                                   

                                                                    serious.    


                                     Better Sentence:  I have an older brother. He is very boring and boring.

 


              

 


                          REVISED:


 


                                                                                My Family



                                                          Hi! My name is _____________. I live in Korea. We are four in the

                                            family. My father is really kind and humorous. My mother is so cute when

                                            she drinks alcohol. And I have an older brother, Hyun-soo. He is very boring

                                            and serious, but I love him as my brother.


                                                           I love my family.


 

 

 

LEGEND:

 

 

 

Red                             Remove/omit

 

SF                               Sentence Fragment 

 

Lower                         Change the letter(s) to small letter(s)

 

                                    Change the letter(s) to big letter(s)

 

FR                               Wrong word order

 

 

 



 

                                Indent the sentence  

 

NR                              No error/mistake

 

WB                              Wrong abbreviation

 

                                 Start a new paragraph

 

#                                  Space needed

 

×​                                  Remove a space​

 

                                Transpose (change the position of the word) 

 

WSP                           Wrong spelling

 

AP                               Add a period (.)

 

 AC                                  Add a comma (,)

 

AE                               Add an exclamation point (!)

 

AQM                           Add a question mark (?)

 

AAP                            Add an apostrophe (‘)

 

+

 

 

 

PL                               Change to Plural form

 

WWF                                Wrong word form

 

WW                             Wrong word

 

WPU                           Wrong pronoun usage

 

RO                              Run-on (Fused Sentence)

 

S                                 Subject Needed

 

 V                               Verb needed

 

P                                 Preposition needed

 

C                                 Conjunction needed

 

                                Article needed

 

PRON                            Add Pronoun

 

ADV                            Add Adverb

 

AN                            Add Noun

 

MP                              Misused Preposition

 

//                                  Faulty Parallelism

 

 

 

 

 

       Edited by: TESS

 

 

 

 

      


 

 

 

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