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교육시스템

제 목	Internet
교정강사	tess
등록일	2022-07-11
작성글	I think internet and cell phone is very usefull. When I lost street, cell phone teach me how to go there. Through them we can meet another country people.
교정내용	Internet I think internet and cell phone is very usefull. When I lost street, cell phone teach me how to go there. Through them we can meet another country people. Title: → ↗ Internet Better: Internet WWF WSP Previous Sentence: → I think the internet and cellphone is very usefull. Better Sentence: I think the internet and cellphone are very useful. WW Red Previous Sentence: When I lost street, cell phone teach me how to go there. Better Sentence: When I lost my way in the street, I can use my cellphone to guide me to the place where I want to go. Red Previous Sentence: Through them we can meet another country people. Better Sentence: Through them, I can meet people from other countries. I’m so glad to have the new technology for communication. REVISED: Internet I think the internet and cellphone are very useful. When I lost my way in the street, I can use my cellphone to guide me to the place I want to go. Through them, I can meet people from other countries. I’m so glad to have the new technology for communication. LEGEND: Red Remove/omit SF Sentence Fragment Lower Change the letter(s) to small letter(s) Change the letter(s) to big letter(s) FR Wrong word order → Indent the sentence NR No error/mistake WB Wrong abbreviation ↗ Start a new paragraph # Space needed × Remove a space ∽ Transpose (change the position of the word) WSP Wrong spelling AP Add a period (.) AC Add a comma (,) AE Add an exclamation point (!) AQM Add a question mark (?) AAP Add an apostrophe (‘) + PL Change to Plural form WWF Wrong word form WW Wrong word WPU Wrong pronoun usage RO Run-on (Fused Sentence) S Subject Needed V Verb needed P Preposition needed C Conjunction needed A Article needed PRON Add Pronoun ADV Add adverb Add Adverb AN Add Noun MP Misused Preposition // Faulty Parallelism EDITED BY: TESS