교육시스템


교육시스템




제 목 music  
교정강사 tess
등록일 2022-07-19
작성글 i like pop becase i want tp rnglis more
i love lalaland ost i ipressed ost
city of star is very good i everyday listen to the pop and i sing a song
교정내용

 


                      


         music


       i like pop becase i want tp rnglis more

i love lalaland ost i ipressed ost

city of star is very good i everyday listen to the pop and i sing a song



        CORRECTIONS:


                          Lower


           Title: → ↗ music


              Better:     Music


                                                                    Red

     Previous Sentence:    i like pop becase i want tp rnglis more

                                            i love lalaland ost i ipressed ost

                                          city of star is very good i everyday listen to the pop and i sing a song


     Better Sentence:     I like pop music. I feel good when I listen to it and it has a different appeal.

                                         It gives me a  feeling of relaxation. I’m happy when I listen to it.


              REVISED:



                                                                               Music


                                                  I like pop music. I feel good when I listen to it and it has a different appeal.

                                         It gives me a  feeling of relaxation. I’m happy when I listen to it.


 


            LEGEND:


Red                             Remove/omit


SF                               Sentence Fragment 


Lower                         Change the letter(s) to small letter(s)


                                    Change the letter(s) to big letter(s)


FR                               Wrong word order


 





                                Indent the sentence  


NR                              No error/mistake


WB                              Wrong abbreviation


                                 Start a new paragraph


#                                  Space needed


×​                                  Remove a space​


                                Transpose (change the position of the word) 


WSP                           Wrong spelling


AP                               Add a period (.)


 AC                                  Add a comma (,)


AE                               Add an exclamation point (!)


AQM                           Add a question mark (?)


AAP                            Add an apostrophe (‘)


+


PL                               Change to Plural form


WWF                                Wrong word form


WW                             Wrong word


WPU                           Wrong pronoun usage


RO                              Run-on (Fused Sentence)


S                                 Subject Needed


 V                               Verb needed


P                                 Preposition needed


C                                 Conjunction needed


                                Article needed


PRON                            Add Pronoun


ADV                            Add Adverb


AN                            Add Noun


MP                              Misused Preposition


//                                  Faulty Parallelism


  


          EDITED BY : TESS


 


           


 


                                                   


 


 


                      


        

 

 

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