hamburger

               I went to New Jersey today and the original surfing did not make it bad weather so I swam and ate a famous hamburger in Ocean City, New Jersey. In Philadelphia it was much less salty and tasty than the five guys hamburgers and other famous hamburgers.

                   CORRRECTIONS:

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                          Title: →↗hamburger

                     Better:   Hamburger

                                                                                                     PRON             AN          WWF/C/P

                     Previous Sentence: ↗ I went to New Jersey today and the original surfing did not make it bad

                                                              AP

                                                     weather so I swam and ate a famous hamburger in Ocean City, New

                                                     Jersey.

                     Better Sentence:    I went to New Jersey today and my original surfing plan did not happen

                                                 because of the bad weather, so I swam and  ate the famous hamburger

                                                 in Ocean City, New Jersey.

                                                                    AC         Red            WWF    WWF               Lower

                     Previous Sentence: In Philadelphia it was much less salty and tasty than the five guys

                                                 Lower

                                                  hamburgers and other famous hamburgers..

                         Better Sentence:  In Philadelphia, it was less saltier and tastier than  the

                                                         Five Guys Hamburgers and other famous hamburgers.

                          REVISED:

                                                                          Hamburgers

                                          I went to New Jersey today and my original surfing plan did not happen

                             because of the bad weather, so I swam and  ate the famous hamburger

                             in Ocean City, New Jersey. In Philadelphia, it was less saltier and tastier than  the

                                Five Guys Hamburgers and other famous hamburgers.

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