교육시스템


교육시스템




제 목 My university.  
교정강사 tess
등록일 2022-07-23
작성글 I am going to write about my university in philly.

I'm very satisfied for my university.

First, we have English classes only 3 hour per 1 day.

And, we have field trip about three time a week.

second, I met many good friends.
교정내용

My university.

I am going to write about my university in philly.

I'm very satisfied for my university.

First, we have English classes only 3 hour per 1 day.

And, we have field trip about three time a week.

second, I met many good friends.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

lower            AP

TITLE: My university.

TITLE: My University

                                  

                               WWF                                                             lower

INCORRECT: I am going to write about my university in philly.

CORRECT: I’m writing about my university in Philly.

 

                                                       MP                       AN

INCORRECT: I'm very satisfied for my university.

CORRECT: I’m very satisfied with my university course.  

                       

                        WWF                                            SINGULAR           WWF  PL     WWF

INCORRECT:  First, we have English classes only 3 hour per 1 day.

CORRECT: To begin with, we have our English class for three hours everyday.

 

                         WW                                                               PL

INCORRECT: And, we have field trip about three time a week.

CORRECT: We also have our field trip three times a week.

 

                      LOWER  WW WWF (V)                      AN

INCORRECT: second, I met many good friends

CORRECT:  On top of that, I get to meet many good friends in my university.

 

EDITED:

                                                               My University

                     I’m writing about my university in Philly. I’m very satisfied with my university.  To begin with,

we have our English class for three hours everyday. We also have our field trip three times a week.  On top of that, I get to meet many good friends in my university.

 

EDITED BY: MARIE

 

 

LEGEND:
 
SF                               Sentence Fragment 
Lower                         Change the letter(s) to small letter(s)
                                    Change the letter(s) to big letter(s)
FR                               Wrong word order
 

                                Indent the sentence  
NR                              No error/mistake
WB                              Wrong abbreviation
↗                                 Start a new paragraph
#                                  Space needed
×                                  Remove a space
∽                                Transpose (change the position of the word) 
WSP                           Wrong spelling
AP                               Add a period (.)
 AC                                  Add a comma (,)
AE                               Add an exclamation point (!)
AQM                           Add a question mark (?)
AAP                            Add an apostrophe (‘)
+
PL                               Change to Plural form
WWF                                Wrong word form
WW                             Wrong word
WPU                           Wrong pronoun usage
RO                              Run-on (Fused Sentence)
S                                 Subject Needed
 V                               Verb needed
P                                 Preposition needed
C                                 Conjunction needed
A                                 Article needed
PRON                            Add Pronoun
ADV                            Add Adverb
AN                            Add Noun
MP                              Misused Preposition
//                                  Faulty Parallelism
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