August 1, 2021
Actually the important lesson of our family member is old chinese word but It means 'Let's live a new life every day.' My father always emphasis this for us. Honestly I still can't understand that mean. And there is another thing that my father said to us. He said 'Don't be a person who applauded under the stage but rather a person who gets applauded on stage.' I understand this more than my family motto. It's more better! My father gives us great word to improve our quality of life. I thanks for him
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CORRECTIONS:
Title: lesson of family members
Correction: Lesson of Family Members
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Previous Sentence: Actually the important lesson of our family member is old chinese word but It means 'Let's live a new life every day. AAP
Better Sentence: Actually, the important lesson that we have in our family is an old Chinese word which means “Let’s live a new life every day.”
WF WF
Previous Sentence: My father always emphasis this for us.
Better Sentence: My father always emphasizes this to us.
WW
Previous Sentence: Honestly I still can't understand that mean.
Better Sentence: Honestly, I still can’t understand its meaning.
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Previous Sentence: And there is another thing that my father said to us.
Better sentence: But there is another that thing that my father told us.
Previous Sentence: He said 'Don't be a person who applauded under the stage but rather a person who gets applauded on stage.'
Better Sentence: He said, “Don’t be the person who gets applauded under the stage; but rather be the person who gets applauded on stage.”
AAP
Previous Sentence: I understand this more than my family motto.
Better Sentence: I understand this more than our family’s motto.
WF
Previous Sentence: It's more better!
Better Sentence: It’s much better
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Previous Sentence: My father gives us great word to improve our quality of life. I thanks for him
Better Sentence: My father gives us a great word to improve the quality of our life. I thank him for that.
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REVISED WRITING:
Actually, the important lesson that we have in our family is an old Chinese word which means “Let’s live a new life every day.” My father always emphasizes this to us. Honestly, I still can’t understand its meaning. But there is another thing that my father said to us. He said, “Don’t be the person who gets applauded under the stage; but rather be the person who gets applauded on stage.” I understand this more than our family’s motto. It’s much better! My father gives us a great word to improve the quality of our life. I thank him for that.
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LEGEND:
Red Remove/omit
SF Sentence Fragment
Lower Change the letter(s) to small letter(s)
Change the letter(s) to big letter(s)
FR Wrong word order
→ Indent the sentence.
NR No error/mistake
WB Wrong abbreviation
↗ Start a new paragraph
# Space needed
× Remove a space
∽ Transpose (change the position of the word)
WSP Wrong spelling
AP Add a period (.)
AC Add a comma (,)
AE Add an exclamation point (!)
AQM Add a question mark (?)
AAP Add an apostrophe (‘)
PL Change to Plural form
WF Wrong word form
WW Wrong word
WPU Wrong pronoun usage
RO Run-on (Fused Sentence)
S Subject Needed
V Verb needed
P Preposition needed
C Conjunction needed
A Article needed
PRON Add Pronoun
ADV Add Adverb
AN Add Noun
MP Misused Preposition
// Faulty Parallelism
Corrected By: Emily
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