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교정강사 tess
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작성글 Hi my name is Tae yun park. I’m 21years old. My major is nursing. I like to study english. Hoho
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                  자기소개하기

 

             Hi my name is Tae yun park. I’m 21years old. My major is nursing. I like to study english. Hoho

           

    CORRECTIONS:

            Title: →↗   자기소개하기

            Better:    자기소개하기

                                            AC                  Lower      NR                             Lower

             Previous Sentence:  Hi my name is Tae yun park. I’m 21  years old. My major is nursing.

                                                                                 Lower         Red

                                                            I like to study english. Hoho

             

                Better Sentence:  Hi, my name is Tae yun Park. I’m 21 years old. My major is Nursing.

                                                  I like to study English too. Hope I can improve my English well.

 

 

                              REVISED:

 

                                                                                 자기소개하기

                            

                                         Hi, my name is Tae yun Park. I’m 21 years old. My major is Nursing.

                                                  I like to study English too. Hope I can improve my English well.

 

      

                   LEGEND:

Red                             Remove/omit

SF                               Sentence Fragment 

Lower                       Change the letter(s) to small letter(s)

                                    Change the letter(s) to big letter(s)

FR                               Wrong word order

                               Indent the sentence                                   

NR                             No error/mistake

WB                             Wrong abbreviation

↗                              Start a new paragraph

#                                  Space needed

×​                             Remove a space​

​                             Transpose (change the position of the word) 

WSP                           Wrong spelling

AP                               Add a period (.)

 AC                              Add a comma (,)

AE                               Add an exclamation point (!)

AQM                          Add a question mark (?)

AAP                           Add an apostrophe (‘)

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PL                               Change to Plural form

WWF                         Wrong word form

WW                            Wrong word

WPU                          Wrong pronoun usage

RO                              Run-on (Fused Sentence)

S                                 Subject Needed

 V                                Verb needed

P                                 Preposition needed

C                                 Conjunction needed

A                                 Article needed

PRON                        Add Pronoun

ADV                           Add Adverb

AN                             Add Noun

MP                             Misused Preposition

//                               Faulty Parallelism

 

           Edited By: TESS

 

 

 

 

 

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