LEGEND:

pink- Change the letter(s) to big letter(s).

CORRECTION:

YOURS:  I want to meet bigbang.

BETTER SENTENCE: I want to meet Bigbang.

YOURS: I love k-pop and d​ododododo love GD

BETTER SENTENCE: because I love K-pop, Dodododo and GD.

YOURS: If I when i meet GD i will be crying

BETTER SENTENCE: If I meet GD, I think I will be crying.

I want to meet Bigbang because I love K-pop, Dodododo and GD.If I meet GD, I think I will be crying.