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제 목 Manners  
교정강사 tess
등록일 2022-08-03
작성글 I want to learn polite english. Becaus I feels like my english sounds rude. For example, English people always say ‘please’ but I feel it’s troublesome.
교정내용

                 Manners

 

                         I want to learn polite english. Becaus I feels like my english sounds rude. For example, English people always say ‘please’ but I feel it’s troublesome.

 

                        CORRECTIONS:

 

                                     Title: →↗ Manners

                                      Better: Manners

 

                                      Previous Sentence: I want to learn polite english. Becaus I feels like my english

                                                                              sounds rude. For example, English people always say ‘please’

                                                                              but I feel it’s troublesome.

                                      Better Sentence: People should have manners all the time. It is important

                                                                      because we meet different people all the time. I want

                                                                       also to learn more English words that can be used to

                                                                       show  good manners in speaking. I think it will help me

                                                                       a lot as a person.

                    

                                   REVISED:


                                                                                    Manners

                                                              People should have manners all the time. It is important

                                        because we meet different people all the time. I want also to learn more English

                                        words that can be used to show  good manners in speaking. I think it will help me

                                        a lot as a person.


 

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Red                             Remove/omit

SF                               Sentence Fragment 

Lower                       Change the letter(s) to small letter(s)

                                    Change the letter(s) to big letter(s)

FR                               Wrong word order

                               Indent the sentence                                   

NR                             No error/mistake

WB                             Wrong abbreviation

↗                              Start a new paragraph

#                                  Space needed

×​                             Remove a space​

​                             Transpose (change the position of the word) 

WSP                           Wrong spelling

AP                               Add a period (.)

 AC                              Add a comma (,)

AE                               Add an exclamation point (!)

AQM                          Add a question mark (?)

AAP                           Add an apostrophe (‘)

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PL                               Change to Plural form

WWF                         Wrong word form

WW                            Wrong word

WPU                          Wrong pronoun usage

RO                              Run-on (Fused Sentence)

S                                 Subject Needed

 V                                Verb needed

P                                 Preposition needed

C                                 Conjunction needed

A                                 Article needed

PRON                        Add Pronoun

ADV                           Add Adverb

AN                             Add Noun

MP                             Misused Preposition

//                               Faulty Parallelism

 

           Edited By: TESS

 

 

 

 

                                                                                 

 

 

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