I went to the harbor park today.

There were Ferris wheel and roller skate park.

So i took a Ferris wheel.

It was very fun.

So I want to go there again.

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                                                          My Harbor Park Visit

       I went to Harbor Park today. It's an amusement park where there are Ferris wheel and a Rollers Skate Park. I rode the Ferris wheel. It was so fun that I want to come back soon. 

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