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I take  a  important project from my boss.

CORRECTION: I took an important project from my boss.

I have been going to greece when i was kid

CORRECTION: I had been to Greece when I was young.

My parents give gave me a present on my birthday.

we are discovered our old stuff.

I will buy a ship before I become 40's