Bsedu- 개인 맞춤형 원어민 화상 과외

교육시스템

제 목	** Homework ** ^ 0 ^ ~ ★: Make sentences
교정강사	LARA
등록일	2022-08-26
작성글	1. Famous => The Mona Lisa was made in 15 century by Leonard da vinci, and he was very famous, smart, exceptional every part of Art, Science, and Engineer. 2. Leadership => He had solved a gigantic problems, so a lot of media praised about his leadership. 3. Mysterious =>The mysterious incident happened in house, after many people were to come to see the house. 4. Declare => The president of Korea was supposed to declare about new policy, but it was delay but bad weather. Thanks you, so much. Have a good time.^*^.
교정내용	Red font= Remove/omit the red colored part FR = For revision 1. Famous => The Mona Lisa was made in 15 century by Leonard Da Vinci, and he was ~~very~~ famous, smart, exceptional in every part of Art, Science, and Engineer. 2. Leadership => He had solved a gigantic problems so, a ~~lot of media~~ people praised ~~about~~ his leadership. 3. Mysterious =>A mysterious incident happened in the house, ~~after many people were to come to see the house~~. CORRECTION: A mysterious incident happened in the house. That's why, people want to go there. 4. Declare => The President of Korea was supposed to declare about the new policy, but it was delay due to ~~but~~ bad weather. THANK YOU PATRICK!