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교육시스템




제 목 Andrew's homework: Make sentences  
교정강사 LARA
등록일 2022-08-26
작성글 They wew harassed constantly to her

The U.N surrounded nouth korea

President of every country have a lot of responsibility

I was defend demonstration when i was a amry

somtimes, My computer connection isn't good
교정내용

Red fon   = Remove/omit the red colored part.

 

FR            = For revision

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They wew were harassed constantly harassing to her.

 

The U.N surrounded North Korea.

 

President of every country have a lot of responsibility

CORRECTION: The President in every country has a lot of responsibilities.

 

I was defend demonstration when i was a amry

CORRECTION: I was assigned in Defend Demonstration when I was in the army.


Somtimes, My computer connection isn't good nowadays. ​

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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