Legend:
Red fon = Remove/omit the red colored part.
→ = Indent the sentence.
Lower case= Change the letter(s) to small letter(s).
UC = Change the letter(s) to big letter(s).
NR = No error/mistake
WB = Wrong abbreviation
WS = Wrong Spelling
AP = Add punctuation mark(s)
FR = For revision
↗ = Start a new paragraph
# = Add a space
× = Remove a space
∽ = Transpose (change the position of the word)
SF = Sentence Fragment
AW = Add a word (noun/pronoun/preposition/verb)
MP = Misused preposition.
Corrections:
Look at the many shooting stars !
Look at the shooting stars. They are too many to count.
NOTE: Look at should not be followed by the adjective many; instead, it should be followed by noun or a noun determiner.
Do you see BIG BANG's music video?
Have you seen BIG BANG music video?
NOTE: Because the question is asking if someone has ever seen the video (from the past until the present), we should use Have you seen
Have you seen a super moon?
Have you seen the super moon?
NOTE: Because Super Moon is a specific natural phenomena, you have to use the definite artile "the" instead of using the indefinite article "a".
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