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교정강사 GLENDA ABOGADIE
등록일 2022-02-07
작성글 Look at the many shooting stars !

Do you see BIG BANG's music video?

Have you seen a super moon?
교정내용

 

Legend:

Legend:

 

Red fon      = Remove/omit the red colored part.

               = Indent the sentence.  

Lower case= Change the letter(s) to small letter(s).

UC             = Change the letter(s) to big letter(s).

NR             = No error/mistake

WB             = Wrong abbreviation

WS             = Wrong Spelling

AP              = Add punctuation mark(s)

FR              = For revision

              = Start a new paragraph

#               = Add a space

×            = Remove a space

             = Transpose (change the position of the word) 

SF              = Sentence Fragment

AW             = Add a word (noun/pronoun/preposition/verb)

MP  ​                 =  Misused preposition. 



Corrections:

 

Look at the many shooting stars !

Look at the shooting stars. They are too many to count.

NOTE: Look at should not be followed by the adjective many; ​instead, it should be followed by noun or a noun determiner.

 

Do you see BIG BANG's music video?

Have you seen BIG BANG music video?

NOTE: Because the question is asking if someone has ever seen the video (from the past until the present), we should use Have you  seen

 

Have you seen a super moon?​

Have you seen the super moon?

NOTE: Because Super Moon is a specific natural phenomena, you have to use the definite artile "the" instead of using the indefinite      article "a".

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