Question 2. What do you like doing most with your family?
My family can only spend time together on weekend and we doesn't like doing outdoor activities.
So, I like to watch a family movie with them at home. Watching movie with snacks is really nice.
Also, cozy sofa and big screen are perfect for watching movie.
Corrections:
My family can only spend time together during weekends that's why we don't like doing outdoor activities.
NOTES:
1. When you are referring to one particular single Saturday or Sunday, you can use weekend; otherwise, if you are talking about
many Saturdays and Sundays, it's weekends.
So, I like to watch a family movie with them at home.
For this reason, my family likes watching movies at home.
NOTE:The sentence is incomplete. Improve your sentence by adding a subject to it.
Watching movie with snacks is really nice.
It is really nice doing this,especially with snacks.
NOTE: The sentence requires an indefinite article 'a'.
Also, a cozy sofa and big screen are perfect while watching movie.
NOTE: The sentence requires an indefinite article 'a'.
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