Legend:
Red Remove/omit
Lower Change the letter(s) to small letter(s)
Change the letter(s) to big letter(s)
# Space needed
× Remove a space
∽ Transpose (change the position of the word)
AC Add a comma (,)
WF Wrong word form
WW Wrong word
APron Add a Pronoun
P Preposition needed
CORRECTIONS:
(Yeon-hee) WF ∽
My classmate,#yeon-hee, who is 22 years old, very kind, considerate x,#and helps (helpful) me to (to me) enjoy myself and to
P APron WF P AC
(with) (my) live (life) in college, is in an undecided situation. She told me that she got a call to have (for) a part time job interview.(,)
WF (has)
But she felt both delighted and unhappy. (NR) So I asked what her problem was. She said that she had no money to spend,
so she had to make money. (NR) However, she didn't want to be busier and more tired than before. If she accepts the proposal, she
WF (thrice)
has to work from 6 PM to 2#AM twice or three times a week. (NR)She asked me what she should do. After thinking over, I persuaded her to accept the part time job, saying 'no pains, no gains'.
WW (went) WW (the)
Finally, she was on her way to have a job interview.
Better: Eventually instead of finally
REVISED:
My classmate, Yeon-hee, who is 22 years old, very kind, considerate, and helpful to me with my life in college, is in an undecided situation. She told me that she got a call for a part time job interview, but she felt both delighted and unhappy. So I asked what her problem was. She said that she has no money to spend, so she has to make money. However, she didn't want to be busier and more tired than before. If she accepts the proposal, she has to work from 6 PM to 2 AM twice or thrice a week. She asked me what she should do. After thinking over, I persuaded her to accept the part time job, saying 'no pain, no gain'.
Eventually, she went on her way to have the job interview.
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