Student's writing:
I have been married for almost 15 years . But I have no kids. So there are two in my family, my husband and me. We got married despite my mother in law’s disapproval because my husband was to be a dentist at that time. She was not satisfied with me. He is very considerate, kind, nice and smart though he likes playing on-line games. He always gives me a big smile execept when he plays games. I love my house that I live now. Before moving in this apartment, I didn’t feel satisfied with my house. I feel very great whenever I recall my house. My husband and I don’t care that we have no kids any more. Of course we had a hard time before giving up having a baby. However, I know how to be happy and what to do for my future. So does my husband.
Corrections:
have been married for almost 15 years .
I have been married for almost 15 years.
(NR)
But I have no kids.
(WF) (WPU)
So here are two in my family, my husband and me.
We are two in my family, my husband and I.
We got married despite my mother in law’s disapproval because my husband was to be a dentist at that time.
We got married despite my mother in law’s disapproval because my husband was a dentist at that time.
She was not satisfied with me.
He is very considerate, kind, nice and smart though he likes playing on-line games.
(WSP)
He always gives me a big smile execept when he plays games.
He always gives me a big smile except when he plays games.
I love my house ( that) I live now.
I love my house where I live now.
My husband and I don’t care that we have no kids any more.
My husband and I don’t care if we don’t have kids anymore.
Of course we had a hard time before giving up having a baby.
However, I know how to be happy and what to do for my future.
So does my husband.
Revised:
I have been married for almost 15 years.But I have no kids. We are two in my family, my husband and I. We got
married despite my mother in law’s disapproval because my husband was a dentist at that time.
She is not satisfied with me. He is very considerate, kind, nice and smart though he likes playing on-line games.
He always gives me a big smile except when he plays games. I love my house where I live now. My husband and I
don’t care if we don’t have kids anymore.However, I know how to be happy and what to do for my future.
Edited by: Sol
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Red fot = Remove/omit the red colored part.
SF = Sentence Fragment
Lowerase = Change the letter(s) to small letter(s).
= Change the letter(s) to big letter(s).
FR = Wrong word order
→ = Indent the sentence.
NR = No error/mistake
WB = Wrong abbreviation
↗ = Start a new paragraph
# = Space needed
× = Remove a space
∽ = Transpose (change the position of the word)
WSP = Wrong spelling
AP = Add a period (.)
AC = Add a comma (,)
AE = Add an exclamation point (!)
AQM = Add an question Mark (?)
AA = Add an apostrophe (‘)
OP P
= Open a parenthesis [(]
CP = Close a parenthesis [)]
PL = Change to Plural form
WF = Wrong word form
WW = Wrong word
WPU = Wrong pronoun usage
RO = Run-on (Fused Sentence)
S = Subject Needed
V = Verb needed
P = Preposition needed
C = Conjunction needed
A = Article needed
MP = Misused Preposition
// = Faulty Parallelism
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