Student's Writing:
2021.06.06. Tuesday
I have very boring day. today is a Memorial Day to pay a tribute the souls of all the fallen heroes who died protecting their homeland.. so I had an off day at work. i really want to go out but there is nothing to intereste things to play near by my workspace.. everywhere is around the countryside.. also no one can play with me.. so i just chilling alone at my bed and just doing my group homework.
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Corrections:
A
Previous Sentence: I have very boring day.
Better Sentence: I had a very boring day.
Note: Use the past form of (have) which is (had) since the activity was done already.
P
Previous Sentence: today is a Memorial Day to pay a tribute the souls of all the fallen heroes who died protecting their homeland.
Better Sentence: Today is a Memorial Day to pay a tribute to the souls of all the fallen heroes who died protecting their homeland.
Previous Sentence: so I had an off day at work.
Better Sentence: So, I had an off day at work.
WSP and #
Previous Sentence: i really want to go out but there is nothing to intereste things to play near by my workspace
Better Sentence: I really want to go out but there is no interesting things to play near by my work space.
WW
Previous Sentence: everywhere is around the countryside..
Better Sentence: Everyone is around the countryside.
AC
Previous Sentence: also no one can play with me
Better Sentence: Also, no one can play with me.
Previous Sentence: so i just chilling alone at my bed and just doing my group homework.
Better Sentence: So, I just chilling alone at my bed and just doing my group homework.
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Revised Writing:
I had a very boring day.
Today is a Memorial Day to pay a tribute to the souls of all the fallen heroes who died protecting their homeland.
So, I had an off day at work.
I really want to go out but there is no interesting things to play near by my work space.
Everyone is around the countryside.
Also, no one can play with me.
So, I just chilling alone at my bed and just doing my group homework.
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Legend:
= Remove/omit the red colored part.
= Sentence Fragment
= Change the letter(s) to small letter(s).
= Change the letter(s) to big letter(s).
= Wrong word order
→ = Indent the sentence.
NR = No error/mistake
WB = Wrong abbreviation
↗ = Start a new paragraph
# = Space needed
× = Remove a space
∽ = Transpose (change the position of the word)
WSP = Wrong spelling
AP = Add a period (.)
AC = Add a comma (,)
AE = Add an exclamation point (!)
AQM = Add an question Mark (?)
AAP = Add an apostrophe (‘)
OP = Open a parenthesis [(]
CP = Close a parenthesis [)]
PL = Change to Plural form
WF = Wrong word form
WW = Wrong word
WPU = Wrong pronoun usage
RO = Run-on (Fused Sentence)
S = Subject Needed
V = Verb needed
P = Preposition needed
C = Conjunction needed
A = Article needed
MP = Misused Preposition
// = Faulty Parallelism
Edited by Glenda
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