STUDENTS WRITING:
hi. im joohyu shim my mom is jongyoung park.
i took a flight may 2 using a virgin australia. from Brisbane 12:05 to Sydney 13:40
the flight number is Virgin Australia 946 Economy (S) Seat number 12A, 12C .
When my mom and me reached in the check-in counter, i thought i checked in all my baggage.
but one of our baggage didnt arrive to sydney. so i went to lost property counter, get a missing baggage numger ref901
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CORRECTIONS:
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Previous sentence: hi. im joohyu shim my mom is jongyoung park.
Correct Sentence: Hi. I'm Joohyu Shim my mom is Jongyoung Park.
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Previous sentence: i took a flight may 2 using a virgin australia. from Brisbane 12:05 to Sydney 13:40
Correct Sentence: I took a flight last May 2 using a Virgin Australia from Brisbane 12:05 to Sydney 13:40.
Previous sentence: the flight number is Virgin Australia 946 Economy (S) Seat number 12A, 12C .
Correct Sentence: The flight number is Virgin Australia 946 Economy (S) Seat number 12A, 12C .
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Previous sentence: When my mom and me reached in the check-in counter, i thought i checked in all my baggage.
Correct Sentence: When my mom and me reached the check-in counter, I thought I checked-in all my baggage.
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Previous sentence: but one of our baggage didnt arrive to sydney. so i went to lost property counter, get a missing baggage numger ref901
Correct Sentence: But one of our baggage didn't arrive to Sydney. So, I went to lost property counter and get a missing baggage number ref901.
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REVISED WRITING:
Hi. I'm Joohyu Shim my mom is Jongyoung Park.
I took a flight last May 2 using a Virgin Australia from Brisbane 12:05 to Sydney 13:40.
The flight number is Virgin Australia 946 Economy (S) Seat number 12A, 12C .
When my mom and me reached the check-in counter, I thought I checked-in all my baggage.
But one of our baggage didn't arrive to Sydney. So, I went to lost property counter and get a missing baggage number ref901.
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WF = Wrong word form
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MP = Misused Preposition
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Edited by Quenny
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