STUDENT WRITING:

 my major is clinical pathology. it is quite hard to styudy new field of major.

i originally study chinese literature and culture. but im happy to going back to student. 

when i think about my frineds in school it makes me feel happy when i go to school.

our class is night class so most of study member is worker. 

having a class with good freinds and well-known teacher is a preasure to me

my relationship between friends and teacher is very good, so my life in school is vey convinient and im enjoining it. My favorite subjuect is a microbiology, and I hate chemistry.

from now on with the lovely friends and a kidly teachers i wish i could have a wonderful memories and ill try to spend my time enjoying it. 

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CORRECTIONS:

                                                                      WSP

Previous sentence: my major is clinical pathology. it is quite hard to styudy new field of major.​

Correct Sentence: My major is Clinical Pathology. It is quite hard to study new field of major.​

                                                                               APS              V         N  A

Previous sentence: i originally study chinese literature and culture. but im happy to going back to student. ​

Correct Sentence: I originally study Chinese Literature and Culture. But I’m happy to go back being  a student. ​

                                      WF            WSP               AC

Previous sentence: when i think about my frineds in school it makes me feel happy when i go to school.​

Correct Sentence: When I thinking about my friends in school, it make me feel happy when I go to school.​

                                                          AC              P    N                A

Previous sentence: our class is night class so most of study member is worker. ​

Correct Sentence: Our class is night class, so most of my classmate is a worker. ​

                                                             A   WSP          WSP    AP

Previous sentence: having a class with good freinds and well-known teacher is a preasure to me​

Correct Sentence: ​Having a class with good a friends and well-known teacher is a pleasure to me.

                                        AP          AP                                       WSP     WSP         APS     WW​

Previous sentence: my relationship between friends and teacher is very good, so my life in school is very convinient and im enjoining it.​

Correct Sentence: ​My relationship between my friends and my teacher is very good, so my life in school is very convenient and I’m enjoying  it.​

                               WSP  

Previous sentence: My favorite subjuect is a microbiology, and I hate chemistry.​

Correct Sentence: My favorite subject is Microbiology and I hate Chemistry.​ 

                                                                                    WSP                                APS   ​

Previous sentence: from now on with the lovely friends and a kidly teachers i wish i could have a wonderful memories and ill try to spend my time enjoying it. 

Correct Sentence: ​From now on with the lovely friends and kind teachers  I wish I could have a wonderful memories and I’ll try to spend my time enjoying it. ​

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REVISED WRITING:

My major is Clinical Pathology. It is quite hard to study new field of major.​

I originally study Chinese Literature and Culture. But I’m happy to go back being a student. ​

When I thinking about my friends in school, it make me feel happy when I go to school.​

Our class is night class, so most of my classmate is a worker. ​​

Having a class with good a friends and well-known teacher is a pleasure to me.​

My relationship between my friends and my teacher is very good, so my life in school is very convenient and I’m enjoying it.​​

My favorite subject is Microbiology and I hate Chemistry.​ 

From now on with the lovely friends and kind teachers  I wish I could have a wonderful memories and I’ll try to spend my time enjoying it. ​​

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→         = Indent the sentence.  

​NR        = No error/mistake

WB       = Wrong abbreviation

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#           = Space needed

×​           = Remove a space​

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AE         = Add an exclamation point (!)

AQM      = Add an question Mark (?)

AAP       = Add an apostrophe (‘)

OP         = Open a parenthesis [(]

CP         = Close a parenthesis [)]

SL      = Change to Singular form

PL         = Change to Plural form

WF        = Wrong word form

WW        = Wrong word

WPU      = Wrong pronoun usage

N        = Noun needed

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RO         = Run-on (Fused Sentence)

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A           = Article needed

MP         = Misused Preposition

//          = Faulty Parallelism  

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