Student #787      sjh168

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Student’s Writing:

im interested in chemistry. when i enter the daejeon univ. i choose my major clinical pathology.

it is hard to study for humanities who study another field. but i think to study science is absolutely important to live modern society. also society requires more graduates from science fields than humanities.

so it is difficult to me but i felt interested in studying science..

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Corrections:

Previous Sentence: im interested in chemistry.

Better Sentence:    I am interested in Chemistry.

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Previous Sentence: when i enter the daejeon univ. i choose my major clinical pathology.

Better Sentence:    When I entered the Daejeon University, I choose to study clinical pathology.

Previous Sentence:  it is hard to study for humanities who study another field.

Better Sentence:    It is hard to study humanities and to understand people, who are in another field of study.

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Previous Sentence: but i think to study science is absolutely important to live modern society.

Better Sentence:    But I think studying Science is absolutely important to live in a modern society.

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Previous Sentence:   also society requires more graduates from science fields than humanities.

Better Sentence:     Also, society needs more graduates from the Science fields than in Humanities.

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Previous Sentence:  so it is difficult to me but i felt interested in studying science..

Better Sentence:    Although it is difficult for me I still think Studying Science is interesting.

REVISED:

I am interested in Chemistry

When I entered the Daejeon University, I choose to study clinical pathology.

It is hard to study humanities and to understand people, who are in another field of study.

But I think studying Science is absolutely important to live in a modern society.

Also, society needs more graduates from the Science fields than in Humanities.​

Although it is difficult for me I still think Studying Science is interesting. 

Legend:

​       = Remove/omit the red colored part.

 ​     = Sentence Fragment   

   ​    = Change the letter(s) to small letter(s).

         =  Change the letter(s) to big letter(s).

         = Wrong word order

→        = Indent the sentence.  

NR       = No error/mistake

WB      = Wrong abbreviation

↗       = Start a new paragraph

#        = Space needed

×​       = Remove a space​

∽​       = Transpose (change the position of the word) 

WSP    = Wrong spelling

AP      = Add a period (.)

AC      = Add a comma (,)

AE       = Add an exclamation point (!)

AQM    = Add an question Mark (?)

AAP     = Add an apostrophe (‘)

OP      = Open a parenthesis [(]

CP      = Close a parenthesis [)]

PL      = Change to Plural form

WF      = Wrong word form

WW     = Wrong word

WPU    = Wrong pronoun usage

RO      = Run-on (Fused Sentence)

S        = Subject Needed

V        = Verb needed

P        = Preposition needed

C        = Conjunction needed

A        = Article needed

MP      = Misused Preposition

//       = Faulty Parallelism 

Corrected by: Joy