교육시스템


교육시스템




제 목 science  
교정강사 glenda1
등록일 2022-06-29
작성글 I am interested in body and blood. so I entered in Clinical pathology department.
This is so differcult, so i study hard this , I study an anatomy and histolohy and chemistry so on.
At first i studt hard this, But i suffer this sudying, And then i get good result.
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STUDENT’S WRITING:

I am interested in body and blood. so I entered in Clinical pathology department.

 

This is so differcult, so i study hard this , I study an anatomy and histolohy and chemistry so on.

At first i studt hard this, But i suffer this sudying, And then i get good result.

 

CORRECTIONS:

I am interested in body and blood. sSo I entered in Clinical pathology department.

I am interested in body and blood. So I entered in Clinical Pathology Department.

 

This is so differcult, so i study hard this

It’s a difficult course so, I need to study hard.

 

I study an anatomy and histolohy and chemistry so on.

I study about Anatomy, Histology and Chemistry.

 

At first i studt hard this, But i suffer this sudying, And then i get good result.

At first, it was so difficult to study this course, I suffered a lot. Because of this, I’ve got a good result in my test.

 


REVISED:

I am interested in body and blood. So I entered in Clinical Pathology Department. It’s a difficult course so, I need to study hard. I study about Anatomy, Histology and Chemistry. At first, it was so difficult to study this course, I suffered a lot. Because of this, I’ve got a good result in my test.


EDITED BY: TEACHER LARA 

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