I found difference between Korea and US again. That is when people cross the street that the street don't have traffic light almost drivers wait for them with no klaxon. This is very important thing in traffic I think.

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Corrections:

                              Add some more words to connect your title with your composition

Title: Manners 2

Better: Manners in crossing the streets

                       →         Pron                                      WF          WF AN                                                      

Previous Sentence I found difference between Korea and US again.

Better Sentence:  I found another difference between Korea and American manners again.

                      WF                                                    WF                                   PL AC            P WF           WF              

Previous Sentence That is when people cross the street that the street don't have traffic light almost drivers wait

            P V WF   WF

for them with no klaxon.

Better Sentence:  This is when people cross the street with no traffic lights, with most drivers waiting for them to cross without blowing their horns.

       ∽​             WF        WF

Previous Sentence:  This is very important thing in traffic I think.

Better Sentence: I think this a very good thing in traffic.

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Revised Writing: 

            I found another difference between Korea and American manners again. This is when people cross the street with no traffic lights, with most drivers waiting for them to cross without blowing their horns. I think this a very good thing in traffic.

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SF                               Sentence Fragment 

Lower                         Change the letter(s) to small letter(s)

                                    Change the letter(s) to big letter(s)

FR                               Wrong word order

→                                Indent the sentence.  

NR                              No error/mistake

WB                              Wrong abbreviation

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#                                  Space needed

×​                                  Remove a space​

∽​                                Transpose (change the position of the word) 

WSP                           Wrong spelling

AP                               Add a period (.)

AC                              Add a comma (,)

AE                               Add an exclamation point (!)

AQM                           Add a question mark (?)

AAP                            Add an apostrophe (‘)

PL                               Change to Plural form

WF                              Wrong word form

WW                             Wrong word

WPU                           Wrong pronoun usage

RO                              Run-on (Fused Sentence)

S                                 Subject Needed

V                                 Verb needed

P                                 Preposition needed

C                                 Conjunction needed

A                                 Article needed

PRON                            Add Pronoun

ADV                            Add Adverb

AN                            Add Noun

MP                              Misused Preposition

//                                  Faulty Parallelism

Edited by: Victor

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